IF: Hurry!
And it reads:
"Life goes by in such a flurry,
everybody is always yelling hurry!
Take the time to stop and smell a budding rose,
grab a friend a catch a dose.
Tell your loved one you love them so,
Because life is a ride and we don't know
when the train will go..."
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Does my poem even ryme??
This theme just made me think of our super rushed and hectic society..
and addiction to technology...
xo, lk
Great illustration, and your poem is great. It does rhyme, but great poetry doesn't have to rhyme, so you're good either way :D
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful. I love the colour choices you've made.
ReplyDeletePersonally, I like Mr. Green's little feathered hat ^_^
ReplyDeletethank you all :)
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